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i was born in a place full of dugs and money
had to struggle in the streets just for a drop of honey
cried everytime i saw my lil guy say hi mommy
knowing that heill grow to hate me for trying to be daddy
always wishing a could change my life for another
but regretting the thought whenever i saw the face of my mother
surrounded by stress and misury
lots of ni***s trying to bury me
never gave in to the temptation of weed
hope my lil guy will grow old enough to forgive me
hope he says “i know what u went through just to raise me”
hope he meets a female that will make him happy
hope he doesnt see what i had to see
hope he understands that nothing in life is free
no matter what i do my lil man will grow
but i hope heill grow to spit better flows
that at school he shows what he knows
if all this comes true
ill always admire you
god,i know im next in line
but let my lil man know i loved him till the end of my time

WOW! personally i think this is really good and i find it really touching, but in the last line it may better to use ’till the day i die’